Friday, January 11, 2013

journal L


              I thought your writing class is very interesting because there is many smile. Actually, I don’t like studying. Because, too difficult class is very sleepy and too easy class is very bore for me. However, your writing class is not too difficult and not too easy, so I could enjoy your class.

              Spring period, I couldn’t use fanboys, but try to do it on home works, I could more and more use it. And now, maybe I can use what I learned like fanboys, topic sentence, before SV and after SV, however and because. Without a lot of homework, I cannot skill up my writing skill. However, I make some mistake in my writing sentence especially grammar, so I think that you have to teach grammar in your class. For example if student A make a mistake in his homework, you pick up some mistake and teach why it is not correct or teach more easy expression like he wrote. Maybe it makes your class more easy to understand and more kind to student like me.

              I think some games is very useful to feel English is close to us. It is very important for studying with enjoying. Whenever I studied English, there was desk in front of me, but in your class, we move other seat and talk with many students in English, so I have never felt bore and sleepy in your class.

              After all, I want to say that your class is very interesting and don’t make us boring no sleepy. However, sometimes there is something which I cannot understand, so I’d like you to teach it especially grammar. Ups, I have one more I want to say for you. Sometimes, you speak fast, so please careful your talking pace.

journal K


              Long days ago, there were a lot of wolf’s towns. They have done a running compare contest, which they had to take part in it because it is the most traditional festival in their culture. One lazy wolf called Jack doesn’t like to take part in the contest, so he went to David who is timid wolf with sly proposition at chapel. The proposition is to pass himself off as Jack. Because they were very looks like each other, Jack chose him. Actually they are twins!! David thought that if I don’t do it, I may be bully by him, or he hates me, so he consents to his plane.

             The contest day, jack didn’t appear the contest, but there is no one who notices his absent. The race was completely ended, but one problem had come out on his plane. The problem is that their dishonest act came out at the end of this contest. Someone shout “he is not jack. David pass himself off as Jack” Because this, Jack was cursed by a devil. Do you know why his plane was come out? To tell the truth, there was an angel. After he listened their talking, he watched Jack until the contest with he thought forgive if they don’t do the plane, but he did it. At the end of the contest, the angel said a devil the story. After that, the devil shouts that and cures him.

              In this fable, I want tell you some opinion. First, doing a sly trick is not good things. Next, whenever you do it, there is someone who knows what you did. Last, if you do it, an action will certainly receive any punishment. In other word, don’t do a sly trick, foul play or cheat.