BR-18 The old woman who lived in a shoe

“There was an old woman who live in a shoe” (p 2).

 

There was a huge shoe. There were more than 8 children and an old woman lived in. the children was very spry, so the shoe house was too small for them. One day, the old woman tried to find giant shoe. She went to down town and went to shoes shop, but there were not hug shoes. She was very disappointed. Along she goes back to shoe house from the down town, she met giant human. He was screaming. She said “may I help you?” Then he asked her to take rid of crab. The huge man tried to hear the old lady’s ask. Then she said “I want your huge shoes. Then she got the pair of shoes and get home. After that, the shoes house was not crowded. This story is very interesting. No one think people live in shoe house. I was surprised, when you read the book, you’ll think same thing like me. The picture was very interesting. The children’s wear was very cute, so you may be interested in the pictures too.

 

retold by Russell Punter ; illustrated by Joelle Dreidemy

London : Usborne, 2008

 

[202 words]

BR 2-15 There Was a Crooked Man

There was a crooked man. (p3)

This book is little bit interesting because there must not be exist. There was crooked world. It is funny world, there were many crooked things. For example there are crooked load, house, window, and so on. The story was not interesting, but after you read the book, you may feel debarrass. If you interested in the book, I recommend you to read the book. As I can say there are not special thing in this story, but it may good story.

retold by Russell Punter ; illustrated by David Semple

London : Usborne, 2009

[87 words]

A story I made

~Love or Money~

 

In 1848, James Wilson Marshall found gold in California. Then people who heard about it thought that I can be rich person. So, they went to California to find gold to be a billionaire. One day, a man names Jack go to California to do same things thought other people. A few days later, Jack found the great spot for digging gold. Soon, he let a company known it with a contract that he got one-third many from all profit. The company started to mine gold. Day after day, they dig around the great spot. They find a lot of gold. Jack got a fortune.  He went bar, disco, and gamble. He got anything what he wants to like some sport cars, a palatial residence and a lot of watch. He got girlfriend too. Her name is Janet. She looks beautiful and noble. He had had a good time. But, suddenly he was attacked by an accident. What happen for him? Actually the company had a quarrel with him about money. The company says “we are so poor that we cannot dig here. Please decrease your income.’’ But he didn’t agree with the companies demand. Few days later, the companies stopped to dig the great spot. Soon, other finder begun to leave California because, they mine all of gold in California and they couldn’t find any more. This is why he and other people became penniless. So he lost a lot of things, girlfriend too. Janet sad “I can’t be with you. You don’t care about me, don’t give me any present.’’ He becomes lonely and homeless. Five years later, he became dancer. He had learned dance for ten years, when he show his dance for a provisional election, he was corrected by manager. After he became more famous, he got a prize for dancing. Few month later the woman visited for him. when jack opened the door, he lost words. The woman was Janet. She said “when I leave you, I wasn’t sad. But I couldn’t. so, I thought Maybe I love you.” When jack heard it, his face turned red. And he thought I have to be with Janet. Few years later, they got marriage. They had three children. Jack thought LOVE is the more important things than money. They had a special life each other. Their love last foever.

 

 

[405 wards]