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Students have own goals. First goal is to get good grade. Students need good grade to graduate from college. To get good grade, students study hard. Students have to finish homework, prepare for finals and so on. Most important goal is getting good job. Students have chance to get good jobs. But, it is not easy. When students are 4th grade, they start job hunting. However, preparation is very important. Students have to prepare for job hunting. From now, students have to decide jobs which they want to get, and study for them. Goals are very important. If you don’t have own goals, you wouldn’t get good life.  Have good goals!!!

In this school, there are amount of people in this school. They have some friends.  They eat lunch at cafeteria or bakery. They eat lunch box or breads with talking each other. After having lunch, they go to next class with friends. There are so many people who accompany with someone. All of them like to do with their friends after school. I’d like to talk you about it later. They always talk each other about classes, families, friends, planning of weekend, and so on. If you hear the sound of this university, there are so many sound of someone talking each other. In this school, there are full of smiles.

There are four faculties in this university, so not everyone learn about same things. Some people who don’t have any dream come to school, but almost everyone come to school with having own dreams.  To be a worker, they always study about their faculties. Some time, there are some people who don’t listen to teacher’s lecture and sleep or use their smart phone. There are so many people who want to study more, and they are irate at the others people. That’s why there is not everyone  who wants to study more and the gap is very wide between someone who wants to study more and others. Everyone in this university has some home works. All of them are very difficult, so if they have to do three home works in the week. It is difficult for them to do. So, they try not to stock many home works later. In the Eibeigakka, so many people study to take higher score than they got score before. They do home works every day and do extra studying. Another course’s students do like this for something about own self.

KGU has good facilities. First, the library is very good. This library is very big. Students can borrow books. There are a lot of books. They can find good books. And, they can study there. There is a study room. It is very good. Many students use it. In the room, everyone can study with their friends and discuss about it. And next, this cafeteria is great. They can get good lunch there. At a lunch time, there are a lot of people. It is not easy to get sheets. But, lunch is very good. Almost every food is delicious. Students cannot give up getting lunch at cafeteria. And also, there are a lot of classrooms. It is hard for students to move classrooms in ten minute. But, too big is not bad. KGU facilities system is very good.

Students have a lot of various hobbies. They have free time. So they spend much time to enjoy own hobbies. Famous hobbies are to enjoy sports. In the college, there are many clubs. So they can enjoy sports. And also, reading books are good hobby. In KGU, there is a big library. They can find good books. Books are very good. Students have to enjoy reading books. Students love shopping. Many KGU students go shopping to the downtown. College students are very fashionable. So they buy many clothes not to be a loser. Also, they like eating. They have favorite restaurants. They enjoy having lunch or dinner there.  Hobbies make college life good, fantastic, and exciting.

Many students have part time jobs. The college students need a lot of money. They need money for school expenses, circles, cost of meals and so on. Almost students have part time jobs after school. Students enjoy their free time to do own part time job. There are few people who have three or four part time jobs. They can enjoy with their friends. Many students go to the downtown after school. The downtown is very famous in Kumamoto. There are a lot of students at night. Students have various ways to come to school. They can come by cars, bikes, bicycles, buses, JR and so on. In the students, they need a lot of time to come to school.  

There are many clubs or circles in the college. Students can choice own club or circle. There are various activities. Clubs are very hard. It is not easy to do club activities. But, they must have a good time. Circle activities are very interesting. The most popular activity is drinking party. Almost students enjoy drinking parties. There are many college students at the downtown at night. In sometimes, there are too drunk students. They need someone to help them. The college students like travels. Travels need a lot of money. But students have money. They can get money by part time jobs. They save money to have good travels. In summer or spring vacations, they can travels for a long time.

There are a lot of people in the college. Students can get many good friends. They can take same classes with their friends. If you can understand about the class, your friends would help you. Also, they can make friends with the circle’s or club’s members. Club activities are very interesting. They can have a good time with good friends.  Having good friends is very important. In KGU, there are many good teachers. The teachers give students great classes. Students want to have good teachers. In the college, students can make friends with foreigners. There are many international students. They can speak English well. So, Japanese students can learn English from them. It is a good way to study English. Japanese students must make friends with international students.

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